The Monkey: Peer Review

The sheet of paper that Hafsa put her feedback on. 

Our first peer review session was with Ethan and I's mutual friend, Hafsa Khan. She singled out the naturalistic acting as one of the highlights of our rough cut, but criticized Corey's costuming and some staging issues.
When filming the final cut, we used this feedback to plan out a new costume for Corey and staged the opening shot a little bit differently. To tailor the shot to Hafsa's feedback, we made sure to convey a sense of camaraderie between the main characters while we played video games.
Overall, Ethan and I appreciated the feedback, and decided that we would try asking for more once we entered the editing process for the final cut.